I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea Hub and my teachers are Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work uploading the weekly tasks. I like how you only have the texts you read during the week on the slides. Please look at the comments on your original post for your wanted poster. You need to change the layout so it is similar to the example. You also need to include who people should contact if they see Batman e.g. the local police.
Please look at my comments on your original post for your writing task. This needs to be typed out in a blog post because it is too hard to read in the picture.
I am also wondering where you thinkboard is? You have put a 'tick' on that slide but I cannot see where you have uploaded your completed thinkboard.
Please make sure you delete any slides or activities you did not do e.g. you can delete slides that give you instructions about a task because we only want to see your work.
Also please upload a photo of your creates you have done this week.
Remember we want to make quality blog posts. This means making a statement about your learning, having a question at the end for the reader and label. Here is an example of labels you could have used for this post: LCS, online learning, reading, writing, maths
Hi Jas,
ReplyDeleteNice work uploading the weekly tasks. I like how you only have the texts you read during the week on the slides. Please look at the comments on your original post for your wanted poster. You need to change the layout so it is similar to the example. You also need to include who people should contact if they see Batman e.g. the local police.
Please look at my comments on your original post for your writing task. This needs to be typed out in a blog post because it is too hard to read in the picture.
I am also wondering where you thinkboard is? You have put a 'tick' on that slide but I cannot see where you have uploaded your completed thinkboard.
Please make sure you delete any slides or activities you did not do e.g. you can delete slides that give you instructions about a task because we only want to see your work.
Also please upload a photo of your creates you have done this week.
Remember we want to make quality blog posts. This means making a statement about your learning, having a question at the end for the reader and label. Here is an example of labels you could have used for this post: LCS, online learning, reading, writing, maths