I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea Hub and my teachers are Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
You have done a great job with your maths this week! You have explained how you solved questions which is what we want to see. Next time remember to delete the texts you do not read during the week. If you deleted all the texts you didn't read you might have been able to fit them onto one slide and just sow which chilli's each text was. I also think you could have used photos in your healthy plate to make it more eye catching for the reader.
Kia ora Jas,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job with your maths this week! You have explained how you solved questions which is what we want to see.
Next time remember to delete the texts you do not read during the week. If you deleted all the texts you didn't read you might have been able to fit them onto one slide and just sow which chilli's each text was.
I also think you could have used photos in your healthy plate to make it more eye catching for the reader.