in my opion i thing been a vegetrians is a good thing cause you safe money in meat and can use that money on other things that are inportant. if everyone was a vegetrians the farm animals would be pets and gardens full of fruit and vege. for the people that arnt vegetirans would have to do all these chours , so i recomend to be a vegetiran.
if i was a vegetrian i would like it cause you get to save money and gas because you can just eat fruit and vege from you garden . even though been a vegetrian you carnt eat meat its a good tning cause you save lots of miney and gas.
i thing been a vegetrain is a good thing cause you eat better and stay healthy . meat is not cheep so maybe only having i pack a week .
by jas
Kia ora Jas,
ReplyDeleteYou have made some great points in your writing such as vegetables being cheaper than meat so you can save money and you can also grown your own vegetables to save money. However, this week's writing tasked ask you to write a narrative (made up story) about the world being vegetarian and you have written something from your opinion. Make sure you read the instructions first before you begin your writing.
There are also some spelling and grammar errors that I can help you work on if you share your writing with me.