I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea Hub and my teachers are Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work Jas. You have filled in the timelines for the reading task well. For your chosen artist, I am not too sure who the artist you picked was as. I also think you could have included a few photos. For example: "She was released", what is this? Is it an album? if so, included a photo of it would be a good idea. I like the drawing you made for the STEAM project, however I am not too sure what it is supposed to be. I suggest next time you include a description about it so we know...how it represents Papakura, where it will be placed in the area and what form of art it will be (mural, sculpture etc...). I also noticed your writing task was not linked in your slideshow, will this be uploaded in a separate post? The create options you chose to complete look fantastic, I particularly like the ice cream drawing.
Nice work Jas. You have filled in the timelines for the reading task well. For your chosen artist, I am not too sure who the artist you picked was as. I also think you could have included a few photos. For example: "She was released", what is this? Is it an album? if so, included a photo of it would be a good idea.
ReplyDeleteI like the drawing you made for the STEAM project, however I am not too sure what it is supposed to be. I suggest next time you include a description about it so we know...how it represents Papakura, where it will be placed in the area and what form of art it will be (mural, sculpture etc...).
I also noticed your writing task was not linked in your slideshow, will this be uploaded in a separate post?
The create options you chose to complete look fantastic, I particularly like the ice cream drawing.
great job jazzy
ReplyDeletereally great job JAZZY
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